Your Illuminated text made me think about.... The Green Lantern movie. I love that movie. :-)
You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... The video got stuck on slide 3 and didn't move on. Also, I would make sure the words are all on the same line, like the words "shall" and "brightest".
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is.... your background and the effects you created for the first 5 slides. The last slide seemed like you ran out of steam because the words aren't very big and it's bulleted.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....The Marvel Movies; never have seen The Green Lantern You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... I had to manually move the slide on slide 3 What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....the word "escape" was trying to escape which I thought was really cool.
Your Illuminated text made me think about seeing Green Lantern with my boyfriend. LOL.
You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... Adding music to your slide. With your backgrounds, I picture hearing something "other worldly." :)
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how your animations really reflected your words (one example was how the word "bright" became brighter and more bold). Nice job! :)
Your Illuminated text made me think about...the green lantern! You should consider changing/adding/taking out....adding some music What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....the titles at the end.... I liked the swipe feature but then all the words stayed in the same spot. Cool!
Your Illuminated text made me think about cheering for the good guys. You should consider slowing the text in the last slides. What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how you brought in the text "escape my sight". PS-I have never seen Green Lantern, so if my reference to good guys seems odd, overlook it.
I like the wipe out animation you used on the fifth slide!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to hearing this music!
I like the symbol for the Green Lantern!
Your Illuminated text made me think about....
ReplyDeleteThe Green Lantern movie. I love that movie. :-)
You should consider changing/adding/taking out....
The video got stuck on slide 3 and didn't move on. Also, I would make sure the words are all on the same line, like the words "shall" and "brightest".
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....
your background and the effects you created for the first 5 slides. The last slide seemed like you ran out of steam because the words aren't very big and it's bulleted.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....The Marvel Movies; never have seen The Green Lantern
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... I had to manually move the slide on slide 3
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....the word "escape" was trying to escape which I thought was really cool.
Your Illuminated text made me think about seeing Green Lantern with my boyfriend. LOL.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... Adding music to your slide. With your backgrounds, I picture hearing something "other worldly." :)
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how your animations really reflected your words (one example was how the word "bright" became brighter and more bold). Nice job! :)
Your Illuminated text made me think about...the green lantern!
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out....adding some music
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....the titles at the end.... I liked the swipe feature but then all the words stayed in the same spot. Cool!
Your Illuminated text made me think about....
ReplyDeletehow much i love marvel!!
You should consider changing/adding/taking out....
add music and i had to manually move to slides 4 and 5
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....
the quote and your green lantern background!!
Your text made me think about the green lantern- just saw it.
ReplyDeleteI would fix the problems on slide 3, add music and align words to make them more readable, like "shall."
I really like the color and font you used for the word "EVIL"- that was great!
Your Illuminated text made me think about cheering for the good guys.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider slowing the text in the last slides.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how you brought in the text "escape my sight".
PS-I have never seen Green Lantern, so if my reference to good guys seems odd, overlook it.